This week's homework:
In this part of the story, Sir
Caldor the Brave and Edward the Page have just met the fire dragon. Describe
the fire dragon in detail. Try to use expanded noun phrases to help you, for
example the dragon’s rancid fiery breath or
his razor-sharp teeth.
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Once up on a time the lived a dragon it had a long neck , big wings and very sharp teeth it was breathing lots of fire it had sharp claws he had spiky spikes . The was to nights you wanted to safe the world and they went to safe it the dragon was very big they called not look at it it was to big they were scared but they had to do it and they went to it they said come lets fight they said to the dragon and they fighted .
ReplyDeleteWell done Amelka. Make sure you say out your sentences before you write them down. It should be they 'fought' not fighted.
DeleteThe fire dragon is a dangerous and hideous beast that is 50 feet tall. It has dark scaly skin and wings that flap like a bird. The ugly crinkly dragon has a roar as crackly as a witch. He has spikes as sharp as a knife. It has grey fiery smoke coming out of the nostrils.
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DeleteVery descriptive Fatima. I like your simile to describe the dragon's roar.
DeleteDragon Description
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The dragon had razor-sharp teeth and its back was scattered with scales that were lined on a slippery, slimy body. His dark blue eyes stood out in his bright green skin that was patterned with jagged scales. His fiery breath ragged across and it was so big that it felt like a hot summer day. His emerald green wings swung out appearing 50 times the size of an ostrich’s wings. Its knife-like tail swished across the cave and created a sound of snowy blizzards. Around its neck hung a golden necklace that was patched with rubies and sapphires. His ears were massive and could hear the tiny little footsteps of a ladybird. His belly was so massive that it could fill the population number of people in Cardiff (in Wales).The dragon gave out so much smoke that not even Caldor the brave could see or know that he was on the dragon’s scaly but smooth back.
This is excellent Yuvika. I love they way you have described his eyes. You have provided a vivid image in my mind!
DeleteThe fire dragon had a long, slithery and has a red back with spikes all over it. The dragon has extremely sharp teeth that look like swords and pointy teeth that stick out .It`s 100 meters tall. It is the most deadliest creature that they had ever seen so far. The way that the dragon breathes is he gets awaken and so he gets mad and that`s when he starts breath out fire. He has pointy black, moldy and disgusting ears .Sir Caldor the Brave and Edward had never seen any thing like it. The dragon also has magnificent wings.
ReplyDeleteI like your simile describing the dragon's teeth and you have provided me with a clear picture of the dragon's ears!
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ReplyDeleteThe fire dragon has long ears that look like a rabbit. The dragon has extremely large teeth that point out like vampires. It's 60 feet tall and it is big as a coconut tree. Sir Caldor was climbing a mountain he didn't know that the mountain was the dragon suddenly he heard a big roar below. The Giant mouth is a monster and eats people and insect. The dragon ears colour is black and brown.
The firebreathing dragon look's like a tall mountain on top of a red soalvy tree. The dragon claw's was larger then a human and as sharp as a sword. He breaths out very smelly smoke. The dragon teeth were sharper then a knife and his tail looked liked an anaconda. His wing was a lot more giant then a house and he was taller the a enormous building. His eyes were the same shape and same size of a pizza. His tall body smell like smoke and he was like tha most shapended scariest dragon . I have ever seen and he look's more like a T Rex then a dragon.
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ReplyDeleteThe fire dragon has a long slithery red neck dripping with skin of people, sharp razor teeth so yellow and dirty the blood doesn’t show. The fire dragon has breath like a burnt sausage and his mouth is so smelly someone could die! The dragon is huge (90 feet tall) and wide (6000 in width) that 60 houses could fit inside him. He wears a big ring on his longest claw that is filled with garbage and dirtiness. His long red back is spikey and prickly the king would bleed. All the people are scared of the fire dragon because of how ugly and scary he looks. Sir Caldor the Brave and Edward the Page are so horrified of how ugly, giant, scary and mean he looks they could run away. His giant wings are huge and red also thin and flappy that he falls down everywhere he goes. The village are scared of him because of his brutal breath and immense body that they move away.
By Sienna
The ice dragon had razor sharp teeth and as sharp as a blade.The dragons tail was from bottom to top of on a really high mountain.When the dragon is mad it swipes its tail whoever made the dragon angry.When the dragon is happy it doesn't harm anyone or anything.Caldor had never seen a menacing and terrifying beast it was the strongest because he had ever saw.
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The colossal fire dragon has pearly white teeth like a knife the size of a 9 year old boy. Its bloody red jaws Nash together and every time it scrapes its teeth it makes sparks. Its big jade wings soar across the blue sky and its wings are the size of rainbows. Its eyes sparkle like amber and its scales are as hard as steel and its scales were very crinkly. It breathes fire all day and you can see the smoke from Australia to UK. It has claws as sharp as razors. He has spikes the size of trees and one touch on the sharp end and congratulations you got a bleed. It is so evil it would eat a continent!
ReplyDeleteThe dragon was a scary,bad,and extremely red.The ears are red faded into a dark orange and a t the point of his ears there is a green spot and it means it is a old beast so the can fight.The legs of the beast are fat orang faded to red an the nails are as yellow as a fresh lemon and the sikn is so smooth like a nice soft rug.The arms a so huge like a big bed the nails are so brow on the tips becase they dig up soil.
ReplyDeleteThe fire dragon has sharp teeth and breathes hot fire out of his mouth. His green long wings to fly and his stupendous colossal tail. He had a red stinging spikes all over his back. The dragon also had sharp claws to hold. The beasts 900m tall,even taller than the Burj Khalifa in Dubai. The wings flap like an
ReplyDeleteeagle and breathes like an koala. His chain on his neck shines like a diamond. No one knew if the beast is true or not.
The colossal fire dragon has pearly white teeth like a knife the size of a 9 year old boy. Its bloody red jaws Nash together and every time it scrapes its teeth it makes sparks. Its big jade wings soar across the blue sky and its wings are the size of rainbows. Its eyes sparkle like amber and its scales are as hard as steel and its scales were very crinkly. It breathes fire all day and you can see the smoke from Australia to UK. It has claws as sharp as razors. He has spikes the size of trees and one touch on the sharp end and congratulations you got a bleed. It is so evil it would eat a continent!
ReplyDeleteThe the sky dragon it was slithery,white,discussing had big black sharp claws it was the deadliest creature to bee seen it had sharp teeth like no other it. Was the biggest beast in the land it was spooky so every one was so scared of it so its 111000000009999999 it has teeth as yellow as the bright sun every one if they saw the sky dragon they would run far far away so never come a cros the sky dragon run away if you ever see it so be perpered to run away if you ever see it's the most deadly beast on the planet to spawn him go to the eg of the dark gloomy forest so don't panick if you do it will come and kill you so warn every Pearson in the village and if you ever come a cross the sky dragon so if you ever see the sky dragon run away as fast as you can
ReplyDeleteThe fire dragon was an evil mythical beast. It's colour was dark red and scorched black.The fire dragon had two rows of forty teeth and they where as sharp as pointy daggers. He had two enormous legs as tall as five elephants.It also had a black pointy sharp nose. The dragon had two fiery red wings made out of lava they where so hot that if anybody touched it's wings it was burn their hand and it will turn into ashes and eventually fall off. He lived high up on Everest mountain. Itliked that mountain because it was so tall and people who tried to kill it didn't get up there that quickly. He travels down the mountain at the speed of light and could kill the people who tried to kill it. Everybody used to climb up mount Everest but when the dragon came no one ever climbed up it again, it was left abandoned. People always used to climb up mount Everest because the dragon used to live right in front of a burning hot volcano where it was born. This horrible fire breathing beast liked meat a lot.It went down the mountain to get some food everyday.He absolutely hated vegetables he never ate one tiny vegetable. This is a horrible terifying beast to have in the country.
ReplyDeleteThe fierce fire dragon had a long spiky tail and razor sharp teeth.The ears of dragon look like as if they are filled up with worms. Neck line is too long like giraffe with black dots.
ReplyDeleteFire blown from the mouth could lit up the whole city. leg was the size of double decked bus.
Feet were so widespread like a canopy which can give shade to thousand people at a time when lifted up in air.
DRAGON DESCRIPTION
ReplyDelete• The big and ferocious Dragon was towering above him! Tom could feel the Dragon’s hot fiery breath. The Dragon’s teeth are like knifes shinning in the hot red sun. The Dragon has soft scaly skin with little brown dots. His eyes are like the rarest Emerald in the world. It has long legs that are 20 meters long. The dragon is bigger than the Abraj Al Bait on top of Burj Khalifai , which height is 828 m (2,717 ft). It is longer than the Great Wall of China ( Length 8,851,800 m)! The wings are like long flags but much more harder. The claws are like sharp blades.
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I think Greek artist made it . In this picture there are 3 horses 3 men! I think at the top there is the god and it’s looking at earth and he’s not impressed. At the bottom picture there is a man or lady tacking a ride in the carriage properly that means good. But on the top one There is a man also tacking a ride but now he's not tacking the animal well not so properly so this is bad. Now we know that good always wins against bad!
DeleteThe ice dragon has teeth as sharp as a blade. It's wing were the size of a double decker bus.Its spikes are a size of an iceberg.It breathes ice and could eat the whole world in two bites.The ferocious and tall dragon its teeth were as hard as steel.The amazing and tall dragon is one million feet tall
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ReplyDeleteAre often lazy.
But cows called Brian
They be flyin'
Up in the air
And out into space
Because of the grass
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Cows called Daisy
ReplyDeleteAre often lazy.
But cows called Brian
They be flyin'
Up in the air
And out into space
Because of the grass
And the gasses it makes!
The fire dragon was an evil mythical beast. It's colour was dark red and scorched black .The fire dragon also had a black pointy sharp nose. The dragon had two rows of forty teeth. His teeth where as sharp as pointy daggers. He had two enormous legs as tall as five elephants.He's got two scary gigantic wings wich where made out of lava. If anyone touched its wings it would be so hot that it would burn their hand, it will turn into ashes and eventually fall off. He lived high up on mount Everest. Everybody used to climb up mount Everest but none ever comes here anymore. People used to come here when the dragon used to live right in front of a volcano. He really likes meat and he hates vegetables. His favourite thing to do is destroying cities and villages. He is the most terrible dragon to have in the country.
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